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I'll edit the title if you have a better one

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:icontinuvil:
I find myself drawn to this, because of the appealing mystique factors. It's quite simple yet I'm completely attracted to it.

A plus point for you for adding something fresh! I mean, this is definitely original, and not quite cliché. I barely stumble upon photographs where the artist decides to make an ambiguous composition like this.

The perspective and framing strikes a perfect balance; it has enough space between the three elements used, yet it’s composed tightly enough to make the image seems focused and in a perfect frame. The goldfish at the center of this frame makes me wonder if there is a link between it and with the flowing hair of the gurl. It’s seems like if the little fishy is blowing the hair into smooth and soft waves.

The other technical aspects of this picture are also great. The colors are varied and balanced quite well. The lighting is just enough that all the details come through.

The overall pallet is beautiful. The plain magical purple color of the dress works perfectly in the environment so as the green pastel color of the wall. The dominance of the royal purple touch combines the stable and calming aspects of blue, and the power of the color red which gives the picture a rich and full feeling. It also evokes a calm, serene, soothed, and exotic feeling to the viewer. The out of focus TV, of course, calls attention and raise many questions.

Being an art appreciator, I see that the image is beautifully crafted overall. It’s almost perfect, and there isn’t anything to improve. Your never fail to impress ya Fahad :)
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:iconthethirdrevelation:
New title: The Modern Traditional?
No idea why, but it strikes me for this picture
:iconmlz88:
good work .. i like
:iconspiralna:
Very interesting photo
:iconsamtaru:
very simple and yet very beautifull.. love the hair/ dress tone .. its very nice

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I love the whole world :heart: with all it's craziness
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the model is just breathtaking
mashallah her hair is GORGEOUS
dont ya think ?
:iconwolf84:
This really nice, and love the blurred TV, though there is this shadow on the right thats kinda annoying, in the middle right.
other than that, great colors. but btw, from where u got the fish :P.

Keep it up F.

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mysterious concept ...

confusing but impressive ..

it really attracted me 1

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Jul 25, 2009, 10:12:56 PM

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